Story Structure in 60 Seconds

This 60-second Jeep commercial is a perfect example of story structure.

In the space of SIXTY SECONDS, whoever wrote and edited this commercial completely demonstrated the Three-Act Structure.

The first act has our main character, Doggo, living his best life with Woman. Jogging, going for drives, hanging his head out the FRONT window–the life every dog dreams. of.

At 15 seconds, the end of Act One, Woman meets Man. Doggo is sidelined. At 23 seconds in (close enough to the 22.5 second First Pinch Point), Woman goes for a drive, WITHOUT DOGGO. Just Man.

As Doggo watches from the window.

Devastating.

The mid-point “this changes everything” moment (at thirty seconds — half way through the commercial), Doggo is back in the car, but now he’s relegated to the back seat. Man has supplanted him in Woman’s heart.

BAD news for Doggo.

The second pinch point would be midway between 30 and 45 seconds. And at 38 seconds, Woman and Man stop for a woman pushing a baby in a pram. He sees them look at each other and smile. A baby would drop Doggo further down the pecking order. He might NEVER get to go for rides again.

It’s the worst possible news for Doggo.

So Doggo takes matters into its own…paws.

Frames Man. Woman dumps Man.

Doggo is back in the front seat again.

It’s a masterclass in writing and editing.

Batteries Not Included

Nick Harding is an idealistic Private Investigator, trying to eke out a living after a spectacularly boring career in Financial Crimes with the Australian Federal Police.

The very recent widow of the billionaire founder of Dvorak Kars — Australia’s first and only EV manufacturer — hires him to root out the fraud costing what is now her company upwards of $5 million a month over the past year.

Nick reluctantly takes the case–we all have bills to pay–and quickly realises that the beatings, excessive running and cars on fire are barely compensated by the healthy day rate and the opportunity to drive one of the sweet, sweet Dvorak convertibles.

With suspects to spare — the wife, the head of security, the corporate CFO — will he figure out how millions of dollars are disappearing before he runs out of time?

Of course he will.

“Nick is a great series character. He’s charming, when he wants to be, diligent especially when he’s looking at a fat paycheck, and a bit of a dog with a bone … and very likable. This is a short, fast read, but with lots of action, a few twists and turns, and several suspects to follow. What he finds leads to a surprising conclusion.” 5 Stars

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